Squeek and Shred Page

We get to see so little of your comic pages here on DA that this is a real treat. Glad to see that a lot of artists use the Blue Line Pro paper as well. You just gave them some good advertising.

On to the critique.

The Good - I admire comic artists that can do huge overlapping panels like this and keep that focus and storytelling going so well. Your bottom panel is the dominant part and it intersects each other panel without distracting the reader and makes a good impact and satisfying effect.

The depth and action in the first panel is also very satisfying. I can go on and on about your art style being a very unique blend of anime and other styles that works so well for anthro characters here.

The Bad - My only concern is maybe that second panel. It works very well but it is so small that you almost miss it when the other two are so large and powerful. I'm not sure how it could have been done better though. I almost commented on the amount of space by Shred's head in the last panel but I see you left that for word balloons.

The Ugly - There's nothing ugly about this page. I love to see it when artists put their time into a picture. I'm always trying to cram in at least six panels per page so I rarely achieve a page that creates this kind of effect and level of artistry. I should learn from sample pages like this.